Here’s my attempt:
Exhausted by the stress of the morning raid, feeling barely able to function, I knew I must take control of the situation because I was the only one who could keep our family together, at least for a while.
My attempt at the cumulative sentence:
Eyes-wide, stumbling back three steps, she shoves the door shut and sprints upstairs, taking two at a time, for he‘ll kill her if he catches her.
Here’s my attempt:
Exhausted by the stress of the morning raid, feeling barely able to function, I knew I must take control of the situation because I was the only one who could keep our family together, at least for a while.
That’s great! Thank you for sharing!
Hey, Chris —
Good one!
This was rather difficult. But here goes…
Here on the stool, in plain sight for all to see, lay the offending scissors that had been used to divorce Lila of her beloved braids.
My attempt at the cumulative sentence:
Eyes-wide, stumbling back three steps, she shoves the door shut and sprints upstairs, taking two at a time, for he‘ll kill her if he catches her.